Reminds me of Xtrullor's current style. The drop from 1:48-2:12 is honestly pretty boring. There's not much going on, and it sounds like the sounds are being played one at a time. I think if you just added some bass lines and other supporting sounds, your piece would sound a lot more full.
Also, if you don't know who Xtrullor is (i feel like you do), I highly suggest you check out his tracks. Your styles sound very similar. In a good way!